FFF for November 11th, 2011

Welcome to my Flasher Fiction Friday for 11-11-11. It's bound to be a great day. Enjoy!



Today by Lindsey Gray

“You feel that?”

The bulge pressed hard into the flesh of my back as he held me tight to his chest. I gulped before I whispered. “Yes.”

“I'll use it. I promise.” His teeth practically marred my skin with each word.

My eyes turned to what was before me. My beautiful bride, her dressed pooled around her as she sat on our marriage bed. The terror echoed off the walls as her ex's grip tightened on my throat. Her eyes met mine, her tears silently fell. Then... I winked. Today was not his day, it was ours.


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16 comments:

  1. Oh wow, that was great. I think you should write a novella about this couple and the terrible ex!

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  2. Oh nice! I guess the ex sought revenge because he married the girl he loved. Great FFF!

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  3. Loved the spin you put on it! Excellent post!

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  4. Aw shit! (Pardon my language) I really enjoyed this read. The twist was unexpected, but very tantalizing. And when he winked...Wow! Loved it! Well done!

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  5. Oh my! You definitely got a story to tell! Great post!

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  6. oh wow!!! great post!!
    Hope everything will turn out right for the newlywed couple!

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  7. What a twist and I love that little wink, such reassurance. I want to know how he's going to get them out of the situation and fast! ;)

    ~LunaEllaAldora

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  8. Here's what he needs to do. Ignore the hand on his chest, it can't do anything. Grab the wrist holding his throat and spin around so he's facing the jerk. Slam his head into his nose. This will cause his eyes to tear. While he can't see, he needs to slam his knee into the jerks balls until he hears a pop. That's the testicle rupturing. He'll be in too much pain to fight back. Then he needs to stand behind the jerk and wrap his right leg around the jerk's leg to anchor him to the ground. Wrap his right hand around his head anchoring it on the left side of his jaw. Firmly grip the jerk's head just above his left ear. It a swift up and back motion rip his neck to the right. You'll hear another pop. That's his neck breaking. Hold him there for a minute to make sure he's really dead then let him fall to the floor. The whole thing should go down in about ten seconds. Honeymoon saved. You're welcome.
    ;)

    GREAT JOB!!

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  9. Oooo. He's got something up his sleeve. Got to love a powerful man who protects his woman. :)

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  10. Enjoyed your take on this very much Lindsey!

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  11. Thanks for all your reviews! Special thanks to Katie who some how knows how to read my mind. Cue the Twilight Zone theme music.

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  12. The ex isn't winning this one ... and he definitely won't be walking out of there either! Great FFF!

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  13. Beautiful turn! I loved your approach to the FFF this week. Now, I just wonder how he takes down that arrogant ex....

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